Confession time: I love whiteboard animation videos. I wish I could draw like that. I also wish I had a sandwich right now. Neither one is going to come true.
There are a lot of animation sites out there. I started looking at a DIY one, but quickly changed gears to an agency page. These guys appear to do amazing work. But their site copy seemed off target. Every line said "we" or "our." A little self-centered. Too much us, not enough you. Great work, great service, and great testimonial & demo videos, but I think they're phrasing their copy wrong.
I was tempted to rewrite their page. Instead, I stuck to the plan.
Here's 102 lines about Whiteboard Animation:
| 1 | Helping presenters become storytellers |
| 2 | The creative way to bring your ideas to life (and look cool while doing it) |
| 3 | The centerpiece for your new homepage |
| 4 | How Fortune 500 companies get shareholder presentations made |
| 5 | Show people what you do |
| 6 | Once you get a taste of it, you'll understand why all movie stars want to direct. |
| 7 | You're not limited to templates, locations or budgets anymore. It's just us and our pens. |
| 8 | Whiteboard animation with all the feels |
| 9 | Animate the awesome into your video |
| 10 | When you animate your idea, you can bring everything to life |
| 11 | If you're here, you already know the power of great explainer videos. |
| 12 | Add whiteboard animation to your agency's list of capabilities |
| 13 | The "you captured the movie in my head!" whiteboard animation team |
| 14 | Animate your way toward engagement |
| 15 | The piece you've been missing for getting your idea across |
| 16 | Ever thought of showing a cartoon to your CEO? |
| 17 | When's the last time you gave a YouTube worthy presentation? |
| 18 | The animation software for better presentations |
| 19 | We put in the brainpower you can't dedicate, because you have so much else to do. |
| 20 | With Whiteboard animation, there are no boundaries |
| 21 | Don't rely on your words to pain the picture in your readers head--show them your vision |
| 22 | Aspiring storytellers! Unite! |
| 23 | Stop using static images. Start bringing your presentation to life. |
| 24 | Create Michael Bay excitement with student film budgets |
| 25 | For anyone who wants to add a little fun to their presentation |
| 26 | The simple fact that we're drawing it, already makes your presentation more fun |
| 27 | Grab a director's chair. Your team of animators is waiting for your command. |
| 28 | Discover your inner movie director |
| 29 | We'll tell your story, better than ever imagined |
| 30 | How to turn your idea into Hollywood-quality movie |
| 31 | The magic formula for explaining what you sell |
| 32 | We can literally draw anything you need. |
| 33 | The whiteboard animators for big product launches |
| 34 | Our markers are the only thing you need to create an entire world. |
| 35 | You don’t need a script. You don't need a voice. You just need a need. |
| 36 | Create original content, written and directed, especially for you. No cookie cutters videos! |
| 37 | The best of the best of whiteboard animation |
| 38 | Make yourself look better (as an animated character) |
| 39 | Bring your vision to (animated) life |
| 40 | All you need to do is sit back, and watch your vision come to life |
| 41 | The easiest way to up your engagement on social, is video |
| 42 | You've got an imaginary cast of thousands at your disposal |
| 43 | Animate like a director |
| 44 | Put the movie in your head onto your presentation |
| 45 | Regardless of your topic, we can find a way to make it fun |
| 46 | If you struggle explaining what you do, you're in the write place |
| 47 | Ever wish you could show your ideas to people? |
| 48 | You're going to love seeing yourself as a cartoon |
| 49 | Where animations happen |
| 50 | YouTube quality whiteboard animation videos |
| 51 | Student film budget. Hollywood quality |
| 52 | The cartoon you'd be comfortable showing in the boardroom |
| 53 | If you don’t tell your story better, someone else will |
| 54 | The whiteboard animation you'd buy tickets and popcorn to watch |
| 55 | In 5 weeks, you'll have a fully-animated explainer video, created by award-winning screenwriters, animators & editors—and you. |
| 56 | Whiteboard animation - all the feels included |
| 57 | The whiteboard animators for agencies who don't handle whiteboard presentations |
| 58 | The most effective way to explain, train or sell your products |
| 59 | We do the work. You take all the credit. |
| 60 | Where big name agencies and Fortune 500 turn for perfectly hand-drawn explainer videos |
| 61 | Your storyboard for success |
| 62 | The whiteboard animator that understands your specific story (and brings it to life) |
| 63 | The beauty of shooting on whiteboard is, no permits required. |
| 64 | How to animate your presentation like Disney |
| 65 | Animation sells your ideas—and excites your audience |
| 66 | Picture your presentation as a Saturday morning cartoon |
| 67 | Animate your vision |
| 68 | Get studio-quality animation in under 5 weeks |
| 69 | Like having a Hollywood director at your disposal, along with a team full of animators |
| 70 | The secret weapon for people who struggle to explain what they do |
| 71 | Universally appealing & easily translated whiteboard explainer videos |
| 72 | Animation tools for better presentations |
| 73 | The secret to powerful whiteboard videos is a powerhouse production company |
| 74 | How whiteboard animation is changing the learner video game |
| 75 | Never rely on PowerPoint to sell your big ideas again |
| 76 | Lose your PowerPoint and find your movie |
| 77 | Whiteboard animation that's universally appealing |
| 78 | Like a Pixar movie you can direct |
| 79 | No snotty actors. No spoiled cast. Just perfect shots and a crew full of partners |
| 80 | Bring your product to life |
| 81 | With whiteboards, you never have to cancel a shoot on behalf of rain |
| 82 | Animating big name clients, one product launch at a time |
| 83 | Imagine world-class directors telling your story |
| 84 | Don’t just talk about emotion. Show it. |
| 85 | When you need your presentation to appeal to everyone, turn to us |
| 86 | Need a video to wow the boardroom? Whiteboard Animation is the answer |
| 87 | You don't have time to learn animation software. Luckily, we already know it, inside and out. |
| 88 | You want fun educational videos? Perfect. That's exactly what we make. |
| 89 | Make your audience the hero |
| 90 | Animation for grown up professionals, that makes you feel like a kid again |
| 91 | More expensive than the DIY versions, and worth it |
| 92 | We're the agency Fortune 500 companies turn to after they try the DIY whiteboard videos |
| 93 | No reshoots required. Get exactly the shot you want with the people you want, every time. |
| 94 | Give a presentation your boss will want to put on your website |
| 95 | The A-List actors of Whiteboard animation |
| 96 | Transform your idea to a movie like magic |
| 97 | The magic behind quality explainer videos |
| 98 | Your audience has spoken. They want more whiteboard videos. |
| 99 | Who says animation can't be professional? |
| 100 | It's your movie. We just help you tell you it. |
| 101 | The affordable way to create quality explainer videos |
| 102 | We're not freelance animators. We're professionals, and we're part of your team. |
Overall: Meh. The lines came quick, but I didn't nail it. I wanted this one to be better
Lessons: Time is my enemy today. I wish I had a day to polish this up. I know there's a great line hidden in here somewhere. I just haven't found it out yet. I'm sure when I look back at this one in a few days, it'll smack me in the face.
If you see it first, let me know in the comments.
Time: I knocked out 77 lines in 44 minutes. Second round took another 22. 1:06 total
Have a page you'd like too see 100 lines for? Shoot me a note.
Back at it tomorrow. Thanks for looking.
23/100
